A quadrille for Dverse
She goes breezing off
In her zephyr jacket
And her gale force shoes
Hurricane clatter of laughter
From her step stepping feet
Tripping out there into summer
Hair moving through the air
Voice twisting back
Bag swinging, making
Her own breeziness,
Her own breeze
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I do love how you have used the weather metaphors here Sarah… (BTW I corrected your link in Mr Linky)
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Thank you! I’m really struggling with my devices here. Like the prompt, looking forward to exploring the responses…
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Fun how you included so many kinds of wind in this. Enjoyed. My late Quadrille:
https://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2016/06/01/but-the-lord-was-not-in-the-violent-wind-dverse-quadrille/
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Oh I love the perkiness and how she owns her breeze!
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Love this, especially:
“Hurricane clatter of laughter”
That one’s gonna stick with me. What awesome phrasing.
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Oh, this was fun. You created a vivid picture.
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Thank you! It was a breezy bit of fun to write. I love this form – not too short, not too long!
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I admire the character sketch and the ending was lovely with:
Her own breeziness,
Her own breeze
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Thank you! It was fun to write.
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