When we got home, the sky was so full of stars, it was as if someone had stuck them on black paper just above the house. Or perhaps the house was the paper cut-out, a black outline against the jewel splattered sky? The Milky Way arched right over us – so close we could reach up and weigh each star in our hands, like ripened plums, and pick them if we wanted to. It was cold, and we leaned together, but still we stood there, heads back, mouths open, silent, watching the stars again. How many times have we stood there, gazing upwards? I can’t count the times, any more than I can count the stars.
White blossom ripens
Into silver fruit, tempting,
Yet untouchable
This is a haibun for Toni over at d’Verse. She’s asked us to write about the stars. Out here, where I live, there’s no light pollution (unless our neighbour leaves his kitchen light on). We frequently just stop and stare into space. And sometimes we look at the stars, too…
Oh I do like this so very much. Yes indeed. I myself cannot count how many times I have looked at the stars any more than I can count them. Wonderful haiku at the end as well.
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Thank you for reading and commenting. I really look forward to Haibun Monday.
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I am so glad to hear this! I love hosting it.
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I love the way a habit becomes magic, the haiku is so wonderful adding to it… the sense of that unreachable plum will stay with me.
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Thank you. We are lucky with our stars here – sometimes!
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Beautifully written. The haiku really makes this poem stand out.
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perhaps the house was the paper cut-out… a lovely haibun…
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Lovely imagery. Thank you.
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I love the plum image. The ending haiku tied in perfectly.
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I loved this. No matter how many times we gaze upward, the beauty and mystery never fail to amaze.
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oh wow. stunning writing! the haiku makes this extra special!
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SMiLes.. home far
enough away from
city liGhts to
see stARs
above
in Lone
skies away
from culture briGht…
PerHaps.. half the
magic is abSenT
ciTy liGht.. and Stress..:)
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I love your riffs on what we’ve written . I’m always amazed at where we end up. Thank you.
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Always
My pleaSure
Of Joy.. Thanks..:)
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The imagery in this haibun is so imaginative and beautiful, from the cut-out house to the ripened plum stars. The crescendo of the whole piece is the haiku 🙂
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I identify with the countless times gaping at the night sky. Well done!
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a paper cut out house, arched milky way, plum like stars and mouth agape in wonder….with a stellar haiku….pure magical…
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Thank you so much. Such an exciting prompt!
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Awwee… I love how your mind wonder and wanders in the night sky. Beautiful piece of writing.
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Thanks, Maria. good of you to drop by!
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It’s good to be back and read everyone’s entries. ☺️ My pleasure, Sarah.
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Late to the reading and posting. Love the idea of stars ripening – ready for the picking but untouchable. Wonderfully written – I am right there with you, gazing upward!
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Sarah, that haiku just took my breath away–the stars as untouchable ripening blossoms–wow!
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Beautiful imagery… Your stars and house reminded me of sticking colored stars onto paper – something that fascinated me as a child… Especially the puffy stickers. 🙂
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Just fabulous…especially love your haiku!
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Thank you! Glad you liked it ☺
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I love the various elements in this, from childhood crafts to fruits tangibly almost within reach.
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome.
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