1. Your marvellous smile, like a spotlight, like sunshine,
That lights up the room, and my heart, and the world.
2. The look on your face when you first tasted chocolate
Your eyes opened wide, like you’d fallen in love.
3. The times when we laugh like we’re both 10 years old,
and the way that you get me when I’m being daft
4. All of the times that you spotted things first,
You use your eyes well, you’ve learned how to look
5. The times that you laugh at yourself
Knowing you’re crazy and doing it anyway.
6. The way you use words, those poems you write,
the fact that I don’t think you know quite
how brilliant they are
7. The times when you suddenly make up your mind,
and the glint that you get in your eye when you wind
yourself up to it.
8. The moments of quiet, when you lean up against me,
There’s no-one as comfy and cosy as you
9. The way that you look at the world, and you want to know more.
10. The fact that you see the injustice I’ve learned to ignore
And you want to know why.
11. The sigh that you heave when I ask you to tidy your room,
and I know that I’m cruel, but I also remember
12. The sigh that you heave when you’ve finished
and know you’ve done well.
13. The times when you’re terribly sensible, holding
The world in your practical hands
14. The times when you’re clowning around, when you dance round
The room, or blow bubbles, or double up laughing.
15. And the fact that I know I can trust you to always be you.
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Walt asks to celebrate at dVerse. In the middle of all the celebrations he describes, my daughter had her birthday, so this is for her. I’m concentrating on the delightful, wonderful, amazing, life-affirming side of teenagers here.
Oh my, the last one yanked at my heartstrings.
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Aww, this had me teary eyed. Can’t think of a better reason to celebrate. Here’s to you and your daughter! Cheers!
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This is just wonderful… what a great way to celebrate, to be bubbly and sensible at once… what joy,
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You’ve beautifully explored many gifts here–not least, the ability to know someone (a teenager!) very well and still sometimes be surprised at how you can simply appreciate her, no parenting expectations, just as a person. 🙂
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Sarah, this is something she will keep and cherish forever. What a gift (that keeps on giving). Writing it, for you, must have been such a tender experience. Great idea for mother’s everywhere. (or friends, spouses etc.)
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A deep bond celebrated with a full heart
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Awwww ❤️❤️ this is a beautiful, beautiful tribute to your daughter on her birthday!! ❤️❤️
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She is lovely! Thanks for reading.
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I celebrate my two every day! Daughters are great to celebrate!
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I only just got off the phone to my daughter and read your poem – I’m all teary eyed and choked up! I agree with Walt – daughters are great to celebrate!
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They absolutely are!
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Beautiful! As frustrating as trends can sometimes be, they DO have a lot of great qualities too! My teenage soon is a perfect example of that!
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I do not have a daughter…but this shows me every reason why I wish I did. This is a timeless gift of love and appreciation.
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Thank you. I am very lucky.
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Beautiful. It melted my heart.
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