I cross the bridge every day, almost without noticing it. I notice the river – the changing tide means it’s different every day. I exclaim at the height of the water, lapping under the bridge at high tide; or the wide glistening banks of mud at low tide. I notice the library at one end of the bridge, storing knowledge, and the old warehouse at the other – storing nothing, now. I notice the birds – flocks of starlings tonight, flying synchronised patterns over the water – now a wave, now a whale, now a cloud – or gulls hanging in the air, or swooping low over the surface of the river. In the summer there may be children jumping off the low wall along the bridge into the river water. They turn up at high tide, daring each other, laughing at the danger. In the winter there are only fishermen, silent and still as winter air. Perhaps we rarely notice bridges. We were there, we are here, we crossed that river. We neglect the thing that carried us.
River swift below
Birds wild sky sailing above
Bridge bearing me home
I like the way you describe the scenery, with a bridge like that every day is an exhibition….
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I can relate to the scenery and I love how you also create a bridge to what is no longer the same, such as the warehouse lying empty now.
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So often we only notice what is missing long after it is gone. Your words create the sense of mundane daily commute eventful for the lack of excitement when crossing.
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Sometimes we do take the bridge for granted, that we don’t notice it at all. I enjoyed the details from the birds to the children to the river ~ Thanks for joining us ~
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Great write…and so true, we sometimes fail to acknowledge the bridges we cross everyday.
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Love this – such depth and emotion in your verse ❤️
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I’m crossing that bridge with you, Sarah, and you’ve taken me there with your attention to detail!
The haiku is lovely.
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Thank you so much. appreciate your commenting.
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So true we often take the hardest working elements/people for granted. I love the way you reaffirm the bridge’s identity and role!
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This is beautiful, Sarah. So descriptive, but lyrical, too.
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Thank you. I like haibuns – the freedom and then the snappy little bit of constraint at the end – a nice contrast.
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I’ve never written one, but yours was excellent.
Something I will have to try!
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dVerse do a fortnightly haibun prompt. It’s a lovely community.
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Thank you. Perhaps I’ll check it out, although I probably shouldn’t add to my fun writing when I’m so behind on my “work” writing. 🙂
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I know what you mean. Though sometimes it’s nice to limber up with a little challenge.
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Yes, that’s what I tell myself–or it’s a reward. If I read an article or finish writing an assignment, I can write a poem (for dessert). 🙂
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This line really hit me: “We neglect the thing that carried us.” – That could equally apply to how we so seldom stop to say “thank you” to those who do so much to help us in our lives
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Thank you for noticing that 🙂
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“We neglect the thing that carried us.” That really struck me…. so true
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Beautiful writing, and intriguing – both pictorial and reflective.
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