This old bitch earth
is still holding out on us –
and yet you sky dance
sozzled. Three sheets,
two wings, one black beak,
giving it all to the wind.
I think you’re whiskey
sipping death, taking it neat,
straight up. What else is there?
Carrion on the rocks,
roadkill chaser. I see you
hanging round the edges,
hammered.
I’m not blaming you.
I’m just reminding me
that my sky tumblers
are resourceful. Always there
for the last call.
Oh, Sarah. You have a way with words that just captivates me. I absolutely love this. “sky dance sozzled” is my favorite, but there is so much to love here.
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Thank you! It’s always special when someone whose work you admire likes your stuff 😌
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Oh so clever introduction to rooks!
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Thank you! Thayer always look like they like a party to me.
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I liked “roadkill chaser”. Nice description of those rooks especially the one resourceful enough for the last call.
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So much to admire here but i really love this line ‘I think you’re whiskey
sipping death’
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The kennings for the rooks are so great… you would have loved when we had those as a prompt a few years back….
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“and yet you sky dance
sozzled”
I don’t know if you invented “sozzled” or not, but I LOVE it!
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I wish I had invented it. It’s another drunk word. I always think it’s referring to what happens to your speech when you’re really sozzled
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Great images here! I especially like the use of sozzled. I learned a new word today and thoroughly enjoyed your writing.
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A clever response to the prompt 🙂
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Thank you
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I think that’s brilliant.
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