First
flickering flame
torch bulb
never quite
lit
first drops of
dark
first painless
stain
first tears
For Paul over at Real Toads, on the other channel. A poem about a first.
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First
flickering flame
torch bulb
never quite
lit
first drops of
dark
first painless
stain
first tears
For Paul over at Real Toads, on the other channel. A poem about a first.
Intense!
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Yes. I’m not usually that intense, but this is what emerged…
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Magical poem
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Thank you for taking the time to comment😌
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Those first tears of heartbreak are such a shock. So well said.
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Thank you for your comment. Appreciated. 😌
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This is so intense!
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Thank you, Sanaa.
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Wow Sarah. So much painted in so few words. Young love thwarted and lessons learned…or not. Wonderful write.
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I love this small intense poem. It says so much in so few words and it can be interpreted in so many ways.
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Very moving.
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Thank you for your comments. Appreciated.
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First tears, first heartbreak…so tough Poignant and powerful writing
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