The old magic
carried the scent of herbs,
and blood,
and woodsmoke. It furled
pale fingers round
distant hearts, coiled
its shimmering length
round lovers, twined
breath and death, into
slow darkness.
This new magic
shines and glistens,
pings and tings,
snaps. It moves fast,
flickering
electric sparks,
fizzing blue lights –
it slings itself
around the globe,
whirring into space.
We gaze, jaw-dropped,
reaching out our monkey paws,
touching the shiny,
discarding that old
smell haunted stuff,
that lizard brain stuff,
that visceral, polysensual stuff,
stretching our brains
into new conformations,
feeding our eyes
and yet, that old magic
lingers, in a whiff of
leafmould, mouth-scent
of rose, that waft of something
that takes you back
to your mother’s mirror,
a kitchen somewhere.
We are earth
water fire
air
we are electric
we are atomic
we are the magic.
For Paul Scribbles, at dVerse, who is asking for something magical tonight…
Nice ending. We are real magic no matter how we model it.
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Yes we are the magic…walking miracles each and every one…if only we could see that. I still prefer that old magic 😉
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Oooo, I love the old magic you weave. Much more rich than our modern stuff, I think. Love that 4th stanza. Superb images!
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Bravo Sarah! This poem is magic from start to finish. So many lines to love in this but especially, that last line. We are the magic – either black magic or white….Simply wonderful.
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A wonderful write Sarah! I love the memories and anchors that still connect us to the old magic and your final stanza is so full of power :o) xxx
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Love this, especially:
“It furled
pale fingers round
distant hearts”
So beautiful.
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Magical word imagery.
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A beautiful incantation – magical!
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Thank you for dropping by…
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Thank you!
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nice movement and rhythm,
and a great ending.
Randy
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Thanks for reading!
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Thank you. I wasn’t entirely sure about ending, so I’m glad you thought it was ok.
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Your first sentence (4 lines) hooked me hard–OMG /the scent of herbs, and blood and woodsmoke/–wordsmithing to the max. The new magic is fodder for our kids–the old magic seems even more essential as the years pass; but it is important to remember that as youth, our magic was not yet old, just bold.
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Part of my starting point was the Arthur C Clarke quote you used. I think there are echoes in our poems.
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Love how you ended this magic… somehow you tied the ethereal in the beginning into firm soil of memories.. which is the true magic of life I think
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beautifully done, Sarah! I especially enjoyed the lines:
‘…coiled
its shimmering length
round lovers, twined
breath and death, into
slow darkness’
and
‘…yet, that old magic
lingers, in a whiff of
leafmould, mouth-scent
of rose, that waft of something
that takes you back
to your mother’s mirror’.
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I love the last verse especially. Like an incantation. (K)
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Ooh wow, the opening of this poem really drew me in. I prefer old magic 😉 I love how sensory it is, too – ‘smell-haunted stuff’, ‘a whiff of leafmould’. Lovely.
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Thank you! I think we neglect the power of our sense of smell. We are becoming too dependent on vision as a way of communicating and engaging with the world.
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Love this, especially your description of the new magic in the second stanza and the “smell haunted stuff” and the “mouth-scent.” Very cool poem!
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You brought magic alive in this poem….both the old and the new. Beautiful write!
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