I am the last of the three
and the power in me
is the power of time
that crumbles all,
the power of root,
that carves all,
the power of wind,
that wears all.
I will walk through
the dark of the year,
and you will hear
my footsteps echo
on hard ground,
and my words will
whisper in the whirling wind.
I am the last of the three,
the one who bears
the winding sheet,
the one who stands
in the doorway,
and my strength is
the strength of the
tree enduring,
the fire burning,
the storm raging,
the night consuming.
Happy Samhain, Halloween, Day of the Dead, whatever. Bjorn has asked us to write from the point of view of a monster. I’m paying tribute to the third, and darkest, aspect of the triple goddess – the Crone. Hard to love a crone.
Head over to dVerse for some spooky Halloweeny poetry…
At first I thought the last one of the three referred to the three crones of Macbeth, but your explanation made it all clear.. love the voice and the way you used the rhymes…
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I like the alliteration in “my words will
whisper in the whirling wind”.
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Thank you!
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Terrific all hallows eve piece ! I, for one, loved the crone–though she seems to be a scary bitch/witch. I, too, thought of the Macbeth reference.
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Nice one, Sarah. You captured a very medieval atmosphere.
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Nicely done! At first I thought you were referencing the crone of the mythological “crone, mother, maiden” trio.
I’m currently hosting a poetry contest, you might be interested in submitting something
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I was, I was! Though our house is full of Macbeth at the moment, so maybe they snuck in. I’ll check your competition out, thank you.
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“Last of the three, the one who bears the winding sheet”. This is so well written!
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Thank you, Beverly!
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I can just about hear the eerie, croaky voice of the crone.
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Well done Sarah. (I am about to check my door…)
Anna :o]
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Love this, Sarah, especially the lines:
‘…the power of time
that crumbles all,
the power of root,
that carves all,
the power of wind,
that wears all’
and
‘…my strength is
the strength of the
tree enduring,
the fire burning,
the storm raging,
the night consuming’.
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I liked how you gave a hint without coming right out and saying you were writing the crone perspective. For me it came through clearly. Great power and momentum especially in that last stanza. The image of her standing in the doorway…*shivers*
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Thank you. She’s powerful, and it was interesting thinking about where that power comes from.
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Could feel the Crone’s might towards the end specially.
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I can hear Ragnorok in every step this crone takes! Wonderful!
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Oo!! Love this line ‘and my words will
whisper in the whirling wind.’ Very menacing ….a nice read.
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