Light – renga completed

Come and stand beside me at the window,
the world out there is waiting for us.
The day broke early, light scattering, looking
for refuge from the delusions of the night –
all those dreams shattered, now a thousand shards,
melting and fading in the sunlight. I still reach for them,
a sudden refraction bewilders the senses
while day’s mundane routine veils a private loss,
as if the rhythm of this ordinary day
contains some charm to hold our lives suspended
believing yet we hold the sway
the tweak of light, a spark adrift confirms –
and is belief enough? A single spark,
a single flame that shudders in the wind?
When there’s nothing else? but a faith in a
far flung dawn, another light – scattering
diffracted rays that owe their very beauty
to the barrier that defines their limit.
Prisms bursting colour beyond the origin
diffusing value now through the opened window.

 

Sarahsouthwest and Petrujviljoen Jan 2018

The completed renga! Thank you, P, for a very enjoyable collaboration

 

 

 

7 thoughts on “Light – renga completed

  1. A knock-out collaboration! I know I’ve said it before, but I love poems that directly address me and pull me under their spell.. I enjoyed this poem very much and it’s hard to pick out particularly effective lines, but I am taken by:
    ‘all those dreams shattered, now a thousand shards,
    melting and fading in the sunlight…’
    and
    ‘Prisms bursting colour beyond the origin
    diffusing value now through the opened window’.

    Like

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