And so we made it through March –
those late frosts, threatening –
and now the quince tree
is dreaming about leaves,
spring green, wax crayon.
My daughter’s upstairs,
studying for exams
I’ve walked down through
the orchard – they’re all there –
even the baby Bramleys are OK.
They’re on the brink
of blossoming.
We’re going to look
at prom dresses this week.
It will be bullfinches next,
apricot bellied, almost
forgiveable, stripping
the flowers on the
crab apple. I can only watch.
My daughter’s got a place
at college, for September.
And then the blackbirds,
those egg yolk yellow beaks
plunging and pecking
at the ripening fruit.
And me. Hovering
and flapping, like an
anxious angel, watching,
waiting, holding back.
Trusting their wisdom.
Day 4 of NaPoWriMo, and we are prompted to add specific details to our poem, to ground it in reality. NaPoWriMo
❤ The lush spring details are perfect, as is the deliberate restraint in the daughter sections.
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This is such a lovely poem. Spring and the circles of life–plant and human–and you hovering and trusting. Beautiful.
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