I’ve seen her shimmer in the face
of the May Queen, just before she’s crowned,
and glimmer in the eyes of the guy
with the tattoos tracing up his arm,
and a pint to finish outside the Black Horse,
and tears in his eyes as he remembers
lost love, lost days.
I’ve seen her tangle the dancers’ ribbons,
and smooth them out with a smile,
and I’ve seen her hips sway in tatty denim,
in tight skirt, in a rustle of sugared petticoat,
in floral cotton, in checks and stripes,
and the curve of her moving
to the sound of the silver band,
and her scent is wild gorse – coconut ice –
and candy floss, and the sweat
of the working man,
and she’s the first kiss,
and the skirt up behind the waltzers,
and the splash of vodka
in a plastic cup
and a waft of weed
and the laughter of children
and the tinny sound of
the merry-go-round
and I’ve seen her marching
in knee high boots,
tossing her hair and
twirling her baton,
and I’ve seen her waving
from a carnival float,
and I’ve seen her dressed in white,
in pink, in blue, in yellow,
in white again
and I’ve seen her laughter rise
like a silver balloon
into the darkening sky.
Amaya’s hosting at dVerse tonight, and we’re thinking about Carnival – or at least the carnival spirit. We don’t have carnival here, but in my local town we have the May Fair. It’s a massive thing, the whole town shuts down, the schools are closed, and everybody comes out to party. It is mayhem, and there are always lots of stories to be whispered afterwards.
I’ve never experienced this either, but I love the rhythm and repetition here, and I love that final stanza.
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Good imagery!
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I love all the contrasts in the May Fair… from the sad old biker to the sweet young girls, from innocent flirts to drinking and drugs… all of those things.
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They certainly know how to whoop it up down south! I can’t imagine them doing anything like that in Dewsbury. I must say, that I was expecting something dark at the end. But the darkening sky might have been just that and nothing more.
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This is simply marvelous and the rhythm is wonderful Sarah.
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Brilliant, especially the use of the “and she…” repetition. A gorgeous parade of vivacious images!
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I love all the beautiful women shining throughout this poem!
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This is a true jewel of a poem. I love the last stanza. In fact, I love the whole poem with all its beauty, its innocence, it worldliness, the scents and the colors. But Mostly I love that May queen!
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Nice last three lines with the laughter like a balloon into the darkening sky.
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Sounds like a good time, and a good poem!
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love your descriptive variations in this!
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What a wonderful swirling poem!
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I’ve written about the May Fair in the past but it was about the one of my childhood. Yours is so fresh, Sarah, and very immediate, as if I’m there. I love the different images, such as:
‘I’ve seen her tangle the dancers’ ribbons,
and smooth them out with a smile’
and the use of other senses, as in:
‘…her scent is wild gorse – coconut ice –
and candy floss, and the sweat
of the working man’,
and the heady excitement in the lines:
‘…she’s the first kiss,
and the skirt up behind the waltzers,
and the splash of vodka
in a plastic cup
and a waft of weed
and the laughter of children
and the tinny sound of
the merry-go-round’.
The final lines are stunning.
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How wistfully sweet and daring, effervescent with the last bubbles of adolescence to stream up and out of our bodies — you capture some quintessence of the May Queen here, chosen for a glory they can only dream and yet is woven purely from the fabric of the blue collar everyday. For the past 20 years there’s been a May Day festival at my father’s woodland megalith park, and the May Queens have all stepped into gossamer as if into a walled garden of earthly paradise. Wonderful poem.
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What a carousel of a character. Such movements and noises and scents and seductions, although I wonder if that silver balloon will be too heavy a weight in those foreboding dark skies. This is so powerful and real Sarah, you can almost taste the candy floss and hard-earned sweat.
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This is a beautiful telling of the fleeting, holograph-like happiness of a festival. I love how you kept showing the reader the shimmery, silvery glints of light, from the dresses to the tears to that final sole balloon going away into vast nothingness. This can be a metaphor for youth and the contrasts and despair people might experience when they’ve put all their energy and hopes into the stuff that sparkles for a moment. Such a great poem, Sarah!
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Your Msy Fair, just as Mardi Gras, collects a colorful bouquet of characters that linger in memory. I loved your poem!
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You capture how we become everyone and no one as part of the motion and noise and color and crowd. It does catch us up so we can let go. (K)
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Hmmm – interesting symbolism in the colors – white, pink, blue, yellow, white again. Innocence, female, male, cowardice, death.
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