Some of us live knowing we may drown,
yet something in us cannot keep away:
we’re still in thrall to the sea’s wild sound.
We walk a tightrope. Risk is all around,
we know fear, but we cannot feel afraid –
some of us live knowing we may drown
at the world’s edge, where the dark waves pound.
As the last light fades into soft grey,
we’re still in thrall to the sea’s wild sound.
Days when the sand is sugar brown,
and the lace-edged wavelets sweetly play,
some of us live, knowing we may drown
and when the storm is raging all around
and waves crash in and roll and roar away,
we’re still in thrall to the sea’s wild sound.
You’ll know us. We are restless in the town.
We itch to leave, take the sea-road away –
some of us live knowing we may drown,
yet still in thrall to the sea’s wild sound.
Oh, but I love a villanelle. This is my third for dVerse, where it’s our “form for all” this month.
Hmmm, fascinating. I was wondering if this was a metaphor, but I couldn’t find it as the poem developed, but then I thought, wait, this is about those who live next to the sea, loving her, yet always at risk from storms and more. It was really about that. Not sure I am right, of course. Cool rhyme choices and reads smoothly.
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I love the thought of what pulls some of us to the danger… it could be sea, the fire or illicit love… but it always pull us.
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Too, too gorgeous! A sea lover myself, I am also in love with this poem!
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Thank you. If you love the sea, it marks you.
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Sarah, it isn’t the sea for me, it is the Great Lake Michigan. I like it straight up and as a metaphor.
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Speaking as a veteran sailor who literally cannot swim to save his own life, this really hits me where I live! The form fits your subject well, with the longing counterbalanced by fear.
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A beautiful villanelle Sarah and especially poignant in light of what happened to Agnes Proudhon-Smith who was swept out to sea whilst trying to take a photograph on the isle of Harris 💔
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I love the sound of the sea, Sarah, and you’ve captured it well in this Villanelle!
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I like your praise to the sea though it offers risk of drowning.
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The moth to the flame effect! Well done!
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