“Golden lads and girls all must, as chimney sweepers, come to dust.”
Walking up the lane with the kids. We can watch time pass as the flowers change. The primroses are almost over, and the bluebells are here. The last of the cherry blossom petals blow off our neighbour’s tree. The wild orchids are having a final flourish. There are dandelions everywhere – golden lads and girls – and my two teenagers still blow the clocks.
I walked late last night, thinking about this prompt. Shakespeare and Basho – such different writers. Shakespeare piling up his glittering words, creating complex cities of meaning, inhabited by dreams. Basho showing us a single flutter of a butterfly’s wing. It’s hard to see how they are linked at all.
And then Will lets the jewels fall for a moment, and reminds us that all this will fade. Only the words will be left. The golden dandelion becomes a ball of fluffy white, becomes a seed floating over the hedge.
chiff-chaff on a twig
where we once saw the full moon
caught in the branches
A haibun for Frank at dVerse. He asks us to consider Shakespeare and Basho, both great masters of their art, but so different. The starting quotation is Shakespeare, from Cymbeline – Fear no more the heat of the sun. Basho said it in 3 lines.
Beautifully rendered, with lush imagery that capture the setting, and a thoughtful meditation on the masters. Wonderful!
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Your haibun is gorgeous, Sarah! I was transported by the first paragraph from a drizzly overcast day to a sunny lane scattered with spring flowers and blossom. I love those golden lads and girls – and I still blow the clocks too!
I love how you describe the two writers: ‘Shakespeare piling up his glittering words, creating complex cities of meaning, inhabited by dreams. Basho showing us a single flutter of a butterfly’s wing.’ And your haiku is perfect.
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So beautiful.
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This is a wonderful combination of thoughtful reflection and passage of time. It was a gift to my morning.
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Caught in the branches…all those images and words. Lovely. (K)
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I really love the image of the moon caught in the branches.
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Luv the measure of time passing in watching the flowers. Your haibun is juzt exquisite
Thanks for dropping by to read mine
Much💙love
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