We found her wandering
hazel twig in one hand
feet bare and bleeding –
she wouldn’t speak
her lips were stained
with juice, her fingers, too –
lucky to be lost
in berry season
we said. Lucky.
She was afraid of us.
We offered bread. She ate it,
never looking away from us,
like a wren, like a dog
that had learned to be wary.
She never smiled.
We took her home with us,
to the fireside, and clothes
that were more than rags,
and bread to be kneaded
and floors to be swept
and butter to be churned
but still she held herself
like a deer, waiting to leap –
like a hare, quivering
in her stillness,
like a bird half-tamed.
For Laura at dVerse – a poem of finding – initially inspired by Pablo Neruda’s poem Lost in the Forest.
I love the ambiguity and mystery of this.
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Thank you. I used to write more “story” poems, haven’t done it recently. Maybe this prompt made me find something!
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something so magical about this poem Sarah with some lovely imagery of the forest in that litany of last lines. I look forward to more story poems if this is the spur!
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Thank you, Laura – your prompts always pull something out of the depths.
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you have such depths to pull from!
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Incredible, really one of your best. Feral children can be literary and poetic gold, and you really cashed in. I completely forgot about the “lost” poem, captivated by your touching tale. Your last stanza was killer,”Still She held herself like a deer, waiting to leap, like a hare quivering in her stillness, like a bird half-tamed”, Wow.
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Oh, thank you, Glenn.
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Beautiful. I love this.
This is my favorite section:
“hazel twig in one hand
feet bare and bleeding –
she wouldn’t speak
her lips were stained
with juice, her fingers, too –
lucky to be lost
in berry season”
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Sarah, such a poignant story. Knowing you work(ed) with troubled kids, there is no doubt in my mind that this is a composite of traumatized “feral” kids you’ve worked with. The hypervigilance so often never goes away. Taking her in and giving her a safe space and a sense of normalcy can work miracles. I love what you did here.
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An exquisite poem, Sarah! Who is this mysterious child? You leave us to speculate about this intriguing question. ❤ ❤ ❤
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I second this! Your use of imagery is fantastic, Sarah. I read this three times because I enjoyed it so much 😀
❤
David
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This is brilliant… it reminds me of a story by Tove Jansson (you know the author of the Moomin books) called “the invisible child”, Maybe your foundling will be nurtured back to childhood.
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Oh, I love that story! There’s such kindness in it.
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And you are not truly a child unless you get really angry 🙂
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Sarah- this is fantastic and rife with powerful imagery.
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I love this. The descriptions let us SEE her. I especially love the quality of being poised to take flight, at the end, “like a bird half-tamed.”
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Beautiful work Sarah. The nature imagery was wonderful… 🙂
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