“What is it?” Ellie asks, knowing it’s a ball.
“It is a moon, wrapped in brown paper”, he tells her. Mama casts him a dirty look, preparing for disappointment. Yet, when Ellie pulls off that brown paper, there it is, silvery-grey, glowing, wanting to float.
Outside, the sky is dark. There are stars, but no moon.
“How did you find it?” Ellie asks.
He shrugs. “It was caught up in the ash tree. I climbed up there, prodded it with a stick, managed to catch it”.
She thinks of him, risking the thin branches at the top to bring her treasure.
Later, they climb the hill behind the house and let the moon go. Hand in hand they watch it rise, bobbing into its familiar place. She knows she will always have a bond with the moon now. Its smile will be for her.
A flash fiction for Bjorn at dVerse. We take our line from Carol Ann Duffy’s poem Valentine: “it is a moon, wrapped in brown paper”
I love this… it is a fairy tale with that wonderful moon being let free. It reminds me of when I was very young and wanted my father to catch the moon for me.
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Thank you, Bjorn. I’m glad you like it.
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I remember walking along at night as a kid and the moon walking with me. I’m guessing it does get caught from time to time. I’m happy the children freed her.
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I love this story. Not sure if this is her father, a boyfriend, an older mentor? But Mama doesn’t trust him. And yet here we are….a special relationship grows between the moon and this girl…and between her dad? because of the gift he gave her. A beautiful story.
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Oh my heart this is incredibly tender and beautiful, Sarah! 💝💝
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What an absolutely lovely little story. It feels like a classic, Un Petit Prince…..really very impressed how you did that, and a story I’d love to read to children and chat with them about it after.
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I love this so much, Sarah. It’s like Valentine’s gift to all of us. ❤️
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Ethereal.
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I can’t wait to share this with my sister, who believes I would capture the moon for her if she asked.
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This is lovely and magical.
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Letting the moon go. I love that! And love prevailed.
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Wonderful Sarah, enchanting write! 🙂
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How enchanting this is and made me smile at the ending.
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Magically lovely!
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Oh wow! That is awesome. I love how straightforward, matter of fact they are about getting the moon out of the branches, bagging it, releasing it. Beautifully humdrum magic!
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I ♥️ this. Squeezed my heart, just so. xoxo 🌝
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A pleasant, fantastical iteration of childhood.
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Thank you
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Absolutely charming.
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cute, cute, cute, Sarah
❤
David
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I’m sure I commented last night! Said something about setting the moon free & the beauty of that.
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Ah amazing! The moon set free…!!
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So beautiful. It made me smile.
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This is such a beautiful story Sarah. I love it so!
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So enchanting! This piece will linger with me. ❤
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Intriguing. Makes you wonder what you’d do if you could catch the moon. Would you share it or keep it all for yourself?
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Letting the moon go…what a magnanimous gesture! Intriguing, magical write, Sarah.
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