Maybe it’s that moment
when you wake from sleep
and the world is suddenly strange –
glistening with
noises that shimmer at the edge of sight –
heavy with light that presses on your skin –
the smell of sunshine, lemons, clockwork –
that moment is the one
that really matters,
that changes everything
I’m hosting for Quadrille Monday at dVerse tonight – and our word is “sleep”. But I kind of had to subvert my own prompt! Come and join us, anyway. Quadrilling is fun.
Perfect… and I feel that we all wish that the new day will come with something entirely new.
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Oh yes!
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This is wonderful, Sarah. Yes, I’m such a morning person, but you are so right, there’s that moment, a split-second almost that can change everything.
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Thanks, Merril.
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You’re welcome, Sarah. Thank you for the prompt!
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You captured that moment of change perfectly! This is beautiful, Sarah.
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Thank you!
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You are welcome.
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It is a twilight moment that is real, the only important one, yes…the description in your verse was superb..
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Thank you.
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Love this line: “the smell of sunshine, lemons, clockwork –”
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Oh yes, that first awake feeling. When anything is possible. Beautifully captured Sarah.
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Thankyou!
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Oh, yeah; that 1st (almost fully awake) moment… You nailed it, Sarah. And THANKS for hosting with this cool prompt.
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That moment. I feel like it should be joyful, but it is almost like a panick. Like I forgot something in my sleep. I like your bright, clean images of first light.
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Love the imagery Sarah.
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I enjoyed your shimmering noise and smell of clockwork.
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You describe waking so well, just coming aware of surroundings…refreshed!
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The noises that shimmer…that’s just right. (K)
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How lovely!
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True! That first moment tells us how our day will go!
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Nicely done!
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Yes, it is that moment. A wonderful thought Sarah ☺️💕
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So much can change in a moment! Wonderfully rendered, Sarah!
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Love this Sarah!!
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Beautiful! 🙂
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This is wonderful! You capture that first moment of uncertainty so perfectly.
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That’s quite clever and beautifully expressed, Sarah!
❤
David
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This line just really does it for me:
“the smell of sunshine, lemons, clockwork”
Wonderful, Sarah.
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Perfect capture of the moment described–you take the reader right to it, blinking eyes and being lost for a bit. I also love the line De quotes above–it made stop and ask myself what clockwork smells like–a little oil, heat and precision, perhaps.
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I am so NOT a morning person, but I know MOMENT you speak of. A mental twilight of just meer seconds where nothing and everything is in play. You captured it perfectly.
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