The photo’s gone, the wall is bare;
the Sacred Heart’s been packed away,
leaving the faintest shadow where
the striped wallpaper didn’t fade,
and the piano’s out of tune,
silently waiting all alone
to be polished up and moved,
make music in another home.
The kitchen smells of nothingness.
It once was filled with cake, and chips,
and family rows, and happiness,
and sugared tea that burned your lips.
All of the things that made this home
are packed away, or lost, or gone.
Day 4 of NaPoWriMo, and we are asked to write a sad poem in simple words. They suggest we might think about writing a sonnet. This is a sonnet rhyme scheme, without any syllable count, and without a volta. A sonnot, maybe?
It’s Open Link night at dVerse tonight, so I’ll link this there, too.
“and the piano’s out of tune / silently waiting all alone / to be polished up and moved / make music in another home.” Beautiful descriptions. Really enjoyed this one! 🙂
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Thank you. I was trying to keep it simple.
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Yes, a tinge of sadness midst the emptiness, and the sonnet-mantle. Tis iknteresting how a house, or any space, is influenced by its inhabitants. We have 9 grandchildren. When 6 of them visit on Sundays, our home lights up, hums and struts; minutes after they vacate, we hear an audible sigh of relieved silence.
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I like the way it is open-ended, yet at the same time a finality. Sonnot is funny. Whatever else it’s not, it is well-done.
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Simple and elegant .. all the makings of an unforgettable poem! ❤️
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You’ve really captured the sights, smells and sounds of memories made. I like the nostalgic feel.
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From all that makes a home to an empty house. You have captured sadness in transition.
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It’s your turn to make me cry, Sarah. I was especially moved by the out of tune piano ‘silently waiting all alone / to be polished up and moved, / make music in another home’.
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It’s funny, they were the lines I was least sure about, but they seem to have got a lot of love.
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“the Sacred Heart’s been packed away”…this says a lot about a life in one line, that and the wallpaper un-faded, I have been in those houses. This is such a good poem, no extravagant language, just detail and observation…JIM
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So sad Sarah, when a chapter of love ends…
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I loved all the details here–and I feel somehow that the house is sad, too.
I like sonnot. 🙂 (But well done.)
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Your poem has the feeling of bereavement rather than relocation. A whole chapter in a family’s life has ended. Your poem is beautiful.
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The hint of sadness from the poem at a home not being one anymore comes through. Enjoyed your write.
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