She’s wearing faded denim cut-offs
and her hair is sun bleached, salt dried.
Oh, she glows.
She’s drinking cider, bright with
sunset, and there’s dry sand
between her toes
“I love the smell of rain” she says,
looking all around her, smiling
like rainbows
And this is the second one. Another rainy quadrille for Kim at dVerse.
I love that characterization.. especially that sand between the toes. A real summer girl
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This is delightful – made me smile!
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A lovely write Sarah and I am with her, the smell of rain is wonderful :o) xxx
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Thanks for reading! Depends on how much rain you get, I guess…
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I’ve caught up with you, Sarah! This is wonderful! I love the personification – I recognise that girl, and it’s perfect that she drinks cider and smiles rainbows. 🙂 That’s what I’ll be serving this evening – rainbow cider!
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What a great moment, smelling rain and smiling like rainbows ~
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Wow! I want to know where she found the dry sand. None to be found here. But your poem carries the promise that the rain won’t persist forever… no matter where we are. (If it does, I know how to swim.)
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This is bright! Love the sunset trapped in cider, very evocative! And the smell of rain …. just wonderful (sort of) when you catch that scent in the air. Nice work 🙂
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I like the rainbow smiling.
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Sigh love this especially “She’s drinking cider, bright with sunset.”💜
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I love “the smell of rain”
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Sounds like a great evening at the beach, got a cider in one hand and watch the sunset. Nice picture of relaxation
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Nice contrast between all the bright sunshine of her and our expectation of a cloudless day, but then she throws a wet blanket on us!
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Nice! I thought you were going to make the rain into a young girl sipping sider as water is sucked up into the clouds. The transition works well ! I can see her smiling like a rainbow.
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Now I’m smiling rainbows!
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A joyful, uplifting quadrille. 😁
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