She rules a rainy kingdom
of frogs and slugs and snails
and her silver gleams in buckets
and her diamonds shine in pails
she rides a mighty storm horse
that gallops through the sky
sparking lightning from her hooves
as she goes thundering by
My first rain quadrille for Kim at dVerse. It’s a re-working of an old one. Does that count?
Love the image of that storm horse… a bit like Thor with his eight footed horse maybe
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I’m struggling to keep up – I spotted another quadrille by you, Sarah, and I’m only just reading this one! I also love the storm horse, but my imagination was taken by the silver gleaming in buckets
and diamonds shining in pails. An exhilarating Quadrille!
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And yes, of course it counts!
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I got a bit over-excited! Lovely prompt 🌧
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Thank you, Sarah!
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Wow, she is something, isn’t she ~
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I’ve seen her! …for the past two weeks at least. Someone said that it’s rained so much here that it’s washed the poetry out of the rainy day.
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I like how the silver and diamonds gleam and shine.
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What power!…”…as she goes thundering by…”. Love it!
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She sounds like a force to reckon with! 💜💜
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“She rides a mighty storm horse.” What a great line!
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“diamonds shining in pails”
What a spectacular image that is!
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I like that realm of frogs in buckets and rainy diamonds. It’s a beautiful kingdom. (She can keep the lightning bolts though, it’s too dry here now).
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“she rides a mighty storm horse” — I love that.
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Love it! It reads like Greek Mythology!
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kaykuala
sparking lightning from her hooves
as she goes thundering by
Great close, Sarah! It has the makings of active elements!
Hank
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I like this…it has a fairytale quality and delightful mother-goosey rhythm
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I’d like a good illustrator!
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Someone has to be queen of those slugs and frogs! I like the way you’ve personified rain, honouring her strength and magic. Lovely, Sarah.
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Love the imagery in this piece and the rhyming pattern.
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